| 2 years ago :: Feb 03, 2011 - 10:59PM #11 | |
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Like the two latest TeeJ, that bang theory one was inventive!!
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| 2 years ago :: Feb 21, 2011 - 11:00PM #12 | |
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loving you wears me thin to the bone to the marrow
loving you hurts me but in an unpredictable, easygoing way
loving you is unacceptable and acceptable at the same time
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| 2 years ago :: Feb 28, 2011 - 9:56PM #13 | |
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Wow! Well turned and worded philosophically inclined poems, TJ! I thoroughly enjoyed reading through this thread!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| 2 years ago :: Mar 04, 2011 - 1:58AM #14 | |
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excellent pieces, teej~ love this part:
We embrace the change
and your words about the dichotomy of love.... couldn't be truer~sigh. m22
"It took me a long time not to judge myself
through someone else's eyes" ~Sally Field |
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| 2 years ago :: Mar 05, 2011 - 2:11AM #15 | |
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"loving you
wears me thin
to the bone
to the marrow
loving you hurts me
but in an unpredictable, easygoing way
loving you
is unacceptable and acceptable
at the same time"
~Teejers.
*this needs a title; deserves a title. smoking gem of a poem! speaks volumes in clipped whispers. excellent word crafting, TJ!* |
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| 2 years ago :: Mar 06, 2011 - 8:11PM #16 | |
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Love is the blunder The blinder of humanity, That masks all the insanity and lack of preparation. It covers our bruises.
Once it is ripped away the cuts fester, The new layer of skin atop gone. The dripping fluids(some more solid than others) create An overwhelming pain.
A pain that is the heart of our world, A pain that seeks an answer, A pain that we long to cover up. Not because we are ashamed, but because It makes us shake and undulate. A pain that evokes all emotions at once A pain that reminds the world Why we need love.
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| 2 years ago :: Apr 23, 2011 - 11:36PM #17 | |
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At the last supper the bread soaked the wine Our brains swelled twice their size. Sadly, we believed this made us better, smarter, more saved. The gray matter, drunk with hypocrisy, created dogma. Dogma grew neurologically through the spine to the tail bone through the legs to plant deep roots in the ground. Stubborn roots that stick out of the ground, like fuzzy brown curls of hair. The locks of the Messiah some say, I think otherwise. |
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| 2 years ago :: Apr 25, 2011 - 10:43PM #18 | |
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| 2 years ago :: May 04, 2011 - 11:22PM #19 | |
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Apathy I seek. Never finding a true middle point Peace-loving but realistic, Absurd but concrete.
How we can fantasize about one's death and celebrate it confuses me, Astonishes me, and scares me. While we come together to celebrate the death of one and the alienation of another. |
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