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4 years ago  ::  Jan 13, 2011 - 9:59PM #1
anirbas
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cathedral

air

sacrosanct

the

hushed tone

of snow

slow

falling

to

the ground

a noted

absence

of sound-susurrus of shush
pregnant pause deep and beyond

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4 years ago  ::  Jan 14, 2011 - 1:27AM #2
mommy2two
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sabs...  just crept in here to check in on the queen mother.... and found another piece by her sister !!!


reading it made me quiet within... have been in cathedrals and churches and experienced the same sensation you describe.... the utter and complete peace that comes with silence...


sooooo sabs..... fill us in on life ! i sent you an email here at bnet a few months back- wanted to know how it goes !!! 


regards to david~


babs

"It took me a long time not to judge myself
through someone else's eyes" ~Sally Field
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4 years ago  ::  Jan 14, 2011 - 6:14AM #3
Amycain
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ah, what a gem!!!!!!!!

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4 years ago  ::  Jan 15, 2011 - 7:18AM #4
Roadrunner3
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Sabrina,


Your poem makes me want to be still, and vigilant.


Great job!


This is as delicate as a dewdrop.


RR

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4 years ago  ::  Feb 02, 2011 - 1:55AM #5
anirbas
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Thank you, Babs, Amy and RR for your individual reads and comments concerning this piece.
A treat to see you guys! Hope everyone is well and at a peace, if not happy as a fox in the henhouse...lol
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