I really love both Sabrina's and your poem M22 and that rumi poem is good too!!!!!!!!!!!:):D;)

[QUOTE=mommy2two;1041423]wo ho ho sabrina . THAt was worth waiting for.  love the line :


             " without so much as touching me
              with your artist's fingers...
              Without so much as sliding
              your lips down the curve
              of my pulse beaten throat..."

i know that ! i know that ! my beloved and i know that !!!  what IS up with that, anyway??? its amazing is what it is !  phew. it's getting really hot in here. and just wait till i get amy to copy and paste her latest fantasy over here. then, we will all be useless ! 

((((AMY)))  better come and post yours from " no escaping my love'....

hang on to your seat, sabrina!!!

M22[/QUOTE]

gigglegiggle...had a feeling you'd be able to get into this one...what is up with that, sweets?
it's called a love connection, inspite of and despite the darth of miles between two people...
funny thing is, our situations aren't all that uncommon these days...with the war separating couples, many people are in the same boat as us...loving from a distance...albeit, we do not have to worry about our beloveds being mowed down in a spray of gunfire...thankful
I am for that...

don't want to hang onto my seat, Babs and you can't make me...gigglegiggle...

great and passionate offerings by the both of you...so, I ask...got more???????????

Not In _________ Anymore

we closed a door
that day
on
all that mattered,
turning instead
to eachother-

the extraneous
falling away,
receding quickly
as
we gauged our love
and
slipped on eachothers'
skin for size,
lavishing exquisite
attention
to
all that mattered
laid out
squarely,
side by side,
on
a bed
in
a hotel
in ________
that day.

both pieces are outstanding m22, so effective, so real, I loved both of them!!!

yay!!! finally !