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6 years ago  ::  Jan 08, 2009 - 2:45AM #1
gorm-sionnach
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This is my first go at developing any sort of chant or poem to a Celtic God, so be gentle.:o


   Praise Poem for Ogma
  Hail to thee Ogma
  Force of power and rage
  Thy club lay waste to thine foes
  As they scatter before ye
  Great God of writing
  Thy tongue equal in violence and smoothness
  Stirs the body and ignites the soul
  Oppressed by the invader
  Repelled with your cunning and skill
  A shining fire of resistance
  Great Champion of old
  Usurped by the young
  Steadfast did you remain to your duty
  A third of the enemy did thou slay
  Fulfilling your oaths and promise
  The victory did you ensure
  However heavy was the cost
  Hail Champion
  Hail Scholar
  Hail Patron
Truth in our hearts, Strength in our arms, Fulfillment in our tongues.
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6 years ago  ::  Jan 08, 2009 - 11:54PM #2
gorm-sionnach
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is it so bad that no one wants to comment? I don't mind criticism, really.
Truth in our hearts, Strength in our arms, Fulfillment in our tongues.
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6 years ago  ::  Jan 09, 2009 - 6:47PM #3
Diarmuid
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Hahaha, its absolutely fantastic gorm. =D

Eloquent and it definately reflects the strength of Ogma. Thank you for sharing it.
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6 years ago  ::  Jan 09, 2009 - 10:17PM #4
gorm-sionnach
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[FONT="]go raibh míle maith agat![/FONT]
Truth in our hearts, Strength in our arms, Fulfillment in our tongues.
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6 years ago  ::  Jan 09, 2009 - 10:31PM #5
Feinics
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Thanks for sharing Gorm! Good Job!
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